5th draft DPS

I have added to the article to make it more revealing which would appeal to the audience as they want to find out as much as they can about artists.

4th draft DPS

I noticed that I hadn't changed the color of one of the questions and changed this so that it looked like it was the same as the questions and not qa third speaker.

3rd draft DPS

I have changed the color of the text to distinguish who is speaking in the interview and have changed the style of the headline so that it seems to flow across the page

2nd Draft DPS

I am going to change the style of the headline and color of some of the text so that the audience can tell who is speaking 

1st draft DPS

This is my first draft of my double page spread and I am going to put my pull quote in bold 

feedback actions in progress

I am implementing the changes that were recommended by my peers and teacher and I think that I could improve massively

Teacher feedback

http://www.educreations.com/lesson/view/jack-kearton-waters/5015364/?ref=link
This is the link to the teachers feedback

Peer Feedback - Emily Devlin

Strengths:
You have followed all conventions well and made a good layout.

Areas for improvement:
I think your images need to be clearer and the writing has been cut off on the left hand side which needs improving and maybe have some colors that don't clash as much?

Peer Feedback - Sarah Vause

Strengths - The colour scheme works well together as it continues from your front page. Good pictures included as well as captions and page numbers. Also I like that you set out the actual contents of your magazine into a collum it makes it easy to read.

Areas for improvement: I think that you could organise you're pictures better so you don't have large empty spaces. Possibly include other things such as subscription ad etc. Also add boxes around the images or text to make them stand out more.

feedback by Thomas Powers

your contents page looks really well designed and you have taken your time positioning everything on the page, you have also made sure to choose pictures reverent to your genre although you have not really use your own images and you have repeated the same artist in a different image.
you also could consider making your text bolder to make it stand out against the background, you could also place a border around the images to make them stand out more