5th draft DPS

I have added to the article to make it more revealing which would appeal to the audience as they want to find out as much as they can about artists.

4th draft DPS

I noticed that I hadn't changed the color of one of the questions and changed this so that it looked like it was the same as the questions and not qa third speaker.

3rd draft DPS

I have changed the color of the text to distinguish who is speaking in the interview and have changed the style of the headline so that it seems to flow across the page

2nd Draft DPS

I am going to change the style of the headline and color of some of the text so that the audience can tell who is speaking 

1st draft DPS

This is my first draft of my double page spread and I am going to put my pull quote in bold 

feedback actions in progress

I am implementing the changes that were recommended by my peers and teacher and I think that I could improve massively

Teacher feedback

http://www.educreations.com/lesson/view/jack-kearton-waters/5015364/?ref=link
This is the link to the teachers feedback