Peer Feedback- Shaun

Name of person giving feedback: Shaun Welsh

Overall assessment of blog: Overall the blog has some good work throughout and is structured quite nicely. One thing I noticed is the font on some things are a bit small, but not too big of a problem as I didn't have to strain my eyes or install a camera's optical zoom function to read it.

Stengths of front cover: The image used is quite good and the model's costume links well with the name of the magazine. Also there is good use of conventions such as the plug.

Areas for improvement: Some text could do with some better alignment and the QR code doesen't need so much white around it. If it had any more white i could safely say it was a marshmallow. Also the background could look more solid and natural to make the magazine cover look more proffessional.