My Name: Elizabeth Finlay
From your previous drafts it is clear that you have made significant progress towards your final draft. However there are some elements of improvments. For example; I would change the text size/layout so that it does not overlap the image. This would make your cover look more proffeshional.
I would also add more images on the cover so that it looks more realistic. (they don't have to be massive; just some little ones to support the headlines.) I am also not so clear over which headline is the main headline and this may be confusing for some readers.
Your magazine needs to be instantly recognisable for what genre it is however this is not so clear at first glance.
I like the use of the grey against the white as this adds major contrast. I alos like the main image that you have taken, and the fonts that you have used.
You have made so much great progress, but with a little more work this could look fab! :) well done!
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